Resume Rankings

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20, 13, 4, 7, 14, 2, 10, 15, 19, 5, 16, 12, 8, 17, 18, 21, 1, 6, 3, 11, 9

2.

20-This person blew everyone else out of the water with the prior experience in regards to tutoring.  This person also showed that they are proficient in math, due to the awards listed.  They also listed that they helped raise students math average, which is one of the goals of math clinic.

13-This person had the best layout, however they were lacking the abundance of experience that 20 had.  This person showed how hard they worked due to the numerous accolades mentioned.

4-Although this person's experience in math is somewhat lacking, they have previous experience tutoring.  Prior experience is a big look for in my opinion.

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3-This person got the name of the school wrong.  He called it "Danforth Tech Collegiate." This shows minimal effort on their part.  Typing "Danforth Collegiate and Technical Institue" doesn't take too long.

11-I believe that slag is unacceptable in a resume.  The fact that this person want to "grab the position of a math tutor" shows to me how unprofessional this person is.

9-This person is clearly overqualified for the job.  He stated he started working on gas systems in 1992.  If we assume this was straight out of university, then he graduated high school in 1988.  This would mean he is about 42 now.  This age gap would ostracize him from the other tutors.